Thursday, March 26, 2015

Fantasy Inheritance



Fantasy Inheritance

                A while back I was handed a couple of books and was told “Here read these, they seem like they’d be up your alley.” I’m speaking of my Mother-In-Law in this case, who I might add reads ever so much more voraciously than I, and the books in question were the first two books in Christopher Paolini’s  Inheritance Cycle. I’d never read them  despite purchasing several of the books for my younger brother who like myself is a sucker for a story involving a dragon. I even watched the film which thought was okay but not great.  
                I took them, started reading and ordered books three and four because I dislike having an incomplete series if I can avoid it.  Alas, if I were a man of more means I would definitely have a much more extensive library than I do now.  It took me quite some time to finish between work, the need for sleep and other reasons I’ll get to in a minute, while reading I found a lot of people who’d read them and wanted to know what I thought of them. Not willing to pass judgment too quickly I shared some of what I liked so far and moved on. I was also quite blocked for writing for Brain Wrapped and while talking with David (my co-worker, fellow blogger and all around nice guy) about what to write next, he suggested this and here we are, albeit a little long after that conversation. I try to keep things relatively spoiler free here but in this case it isn’t going to happen, sorry.
                At any rate the Inheritance Cycle consists of four books: Eragon, Eldest, Brisingr and Inheritance, each more of a tome than the one prior to it. A part of its increased length was that the start of the second through fourth book included a synopsis of the story so far, which while well written, seemed unnecessary.  This also like many fantasy novels has a map of its fictional realm and a glossary of words and phrases used in the languages of the various races we meet, which again can be cool but also is unnecessary. The editions I got had some beautiful cover art, each a Dragon that you meet during the story.
                Of the four books, Eragon was probably my favorite. I believe this is because it held the most promise. It was new (to me) and I tried to give it a chance despite any skepticism I had that I would fall in love with the series right away. But I did enjoy it overall and like many stories there were parts I liked and parts I didn’t.

Likes:
·         Cause and Effect – One of my favorite parts of the way these stories were written was the depth that Paolini delved into when it comes to dealing with the consequences of the actions taken by the characters.  Of course without cause and effect you have no story but the decisions made by the characters in these stories often had lasting effects that lasted throughout the four books. The prime example of this would be Elva. Elva shows up later in the first book as an infant, whose caretaker asks Eragon to bless the child. Eragon who at this stage still relatively new to the role of a dragon-rider and new to the language of magic, does so without much thought. The result is that he causes a transformation in Elva that lasts throughout the series and is something Eragon, who wants to correct essentially forcing this blessing upon the girl and dealing with Elva in both positive and negative light. Simple honest mistake, life altering complication. I loved it and of course there are several other examples of this, but Elva was probably one of the biggest.

·         Eragon/Arya – Human boy meets attractive (technically much older than him) Elven girl and becomes utterly infatuated with her. This relationship is probably one of the most honest parts of the journey that Eragon travels.  Pretty much anyone who was ever a teenager could probably relate to this relationship. And (spoiler) my favorite part about it is that in the end they’re friends. But that’s it; he has to get over it even after the ending of the last page.


·         The Jaws Treatment – You remember Jaws, right? Remember when you first saw the scary shark? It was way, way into the movie. One of the things I liked about this is that while we deal with the dark empire run by Galbatorix, you don’t actually deal with him directly until the last parts of the last book.  Even if I wasn’t so stoked about how the interaction between he and Eragon turned out, not having to deal directly with him was nice. 
      


     And…speaking of what I didn’t like…

Dislikes:
·         Roran Stronghammer – I mentioned earlier that this series took me a long time to read. If I could point blame at what caused me to take the majority of that time, it would have been that I HATED Roran Stronghammer. The parts of the storyline featuring Roran were by far the hardest for me to get through. I soldiered through with the promise that I can catch up with Eragon, Saphira, etc. soon enough. This got to the point where I would periodically look to see how many “Roran pages” I had remaining.  I found him more awkward than Eragon and found his tendency to brood highly annoying, he wasn’t Holden Caufield annoying, but he got damn close sometimes.  One of the few things I find myself considering a slight redemption of the character is that his fighting style was to smashy-smash with a hammer. This was probably the hardest dislike for me to overcome in the series. He went from being minor-ish sort of character in Eragon to being all over the place in the remaining novels and I don’t know what exactly it was about him but he and I never got along.

·         The End?!?  - After reading them one of my co-workers asked me how I felt about how the series ended. Now, don’t get me wrong, I love having loose ends. Leave them wanting more it’s been said. However my response to this was more of a “Meh.” You leave Eragon and Alagaesia for that matter with a lot unsaid and undone.  I’ll leave it there. Read it and decide for yourself.


·         Inheritance - The biggest nagging thought in my mind is that this series, The Inheritance Cycle, aptly named. This is both for the fact that inheritance is a major theme throughout the sage but also because of the story feeling inherited. Let me explain what I mean. I in no way want to discredit Mr. Paolini  for the work he’s done, making his mark in the world of literature as he did at such a young age. Honestly it’s more than I can say about myself currently much less than when I was his age at the time the story was penned.

However, when I say it felt inherited in that I was aware of story formulae progressing as I moved from page to page.  There’s a clear mix of coming of age as well as hero journey patterns that are so much a part of the story that I feel like I’m being beaten over the skull with it. Do most stories have these constructs? Yes. Should you be so aware of them that you have trouble focusing on the story? Not necessarily.

We have the common elements of the hero’s journey of course which I won’t break down in detail here for fear of creating a term paper.  You have the common races and elements of fantasy (elves, dwarves, dragons and the like).  There’s also the concept of magic (and naming, for that matter) stemming from ancient language, which those who know it can use it to wield great and potentially dangerous power. Which as a side note also has been a part of an odd knack I’ve had lately to randomly choose to read novels with similar concepts, in this case I’m making a connection to Ursula K LeGuin’s Earthsea trilogy, which I recently finished.

Am I calling the story unoriginal? Not in the slightest. But what I am finding is that it almost feels like blueprints were laid in which Mr. Paolini was directed to make his narrative fit into. He did a fine job with it to his credit, I just wish I couldn’t see the blueprints behind the creation, for me it  
takes away some of the magic.